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Time, Space, and the Things Between

Post by battlefieldCommander on Thu Oct 18, 2012 1:16 pm

Time, Space, and the Things Between is a story I'm writing that originally started out as a Space Station 13 fanfiction turned something else. It's about time travel and how a man has to save the galaxy from future-aliens. If I like it enough when I'm done, I might consider attempting to get it published. If you wanna read the story in progress, click here to get to the Google Docs version of it. I'll update it periodically, and when I do, I'll notify you all through this thread. Thanks for reading!
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Re: Time, Space, and the Things Between

Post by Simon Belmont on Thu Oct 18, 2012 5:41 pm

The story seemed pretty awkward and hard to follow in that first, bar scene. There seemed like a lot of good ideas crammed into this section without explanation. But I did like the direction the story was going for.

Besides the story, the writing and dialogue were great.
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